Rain falls down to my face



The clouds cover the sky.
Thunder rumbles in the distance.
Oh, I wish I could get home in time,
I wish I didn't have to get soaked in the rain.

I asked God for a reprieve
I ask God for another hour's reprieve
When the water from the heavens
And the rain came pouring down...

The streams of water
Washing away the white light
To the sound of thunder,
From the blight of troubled years.

The downpour is a thick veil
"It confounded reality and sleep.
And it seemed to me

About this poem

This poem i written when I was in 8th grade plz rate it critically. Thank you

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Submitted by Iqbol112007 on October 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX AAXX BXBX XXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 458
Words 92
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3

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