I won't to treat you right



My father
I won't to treat you right
I am telling you the truth
My father
i will not mistreat you
My father
Because I know that
You will hate that
My father
I also will show my respect to you
Because I just need to do that
For you
My father
I am so happy that you are my father
And I am one of you children
I am not a teenager anymore
I am one adult now
And I am you oldest child
Also father we have a good
Relationship like father and son
My father
I will not destroy our relationship
I will work hard to keep it
Going
My father
I am so happy
That i live on earth
With you other children
I still remember when I was a Teenager
I had my first communion
And I also had cried of joy
My father
During my confirmation
You thought me how to pray
And we had pray for a long time
Also my father I had given you
My offerings
For you to use
Anywhere is needed
My father
I have a good life
That I am living every day
Also I have nothing to complain about my life
My father
I am living my life to the fullest every single day
Here on earth
My father
I know that I won't live forever
Because I will die some day
And you will  send you angel
That will come and take me to heaven
Where I will rest in peace
Forever

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Written on September 29, 2021

Submitted by aldokraas093 on September 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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