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Gone

Nisa Asif 2009 (lahore)

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They cried,they yearned
she went far far away

she left them
she saw what alive people couldn't see
she went underneath the ground and high above the clouds

the weather cried with them
the weather joyed with her

she was set free
her pain lasted for a long time

her trapped sparrow has left her
she got free from the pains of the world
and lives freely above the clouds

About this poem

I wrote this poem for my fathers mother.Who recently died on 24 Sep'21.Her pain lasted for a long time.For the past 7 years she had been having her dilases.But know she is GONE and FREE.

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Submitted by nisa.11997 on September 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX ABC AD BX DXC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 357
Words 71
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 2, 2, 3
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