The travelers choice



I traveled on solid ground
That's when I had a way of life
When we aren't exposed touch of the world.
Then I traveled on shaky ground
That's when we begin to do different things in life and just simply make a mess
Of what we could of been best.
Then here comes stormy ground
We try some hard to get it together  with out direction
Wishing our lives  could rewind
Unfortunately not this time.
We try all we can
Just to begin again.
Falling deeper into sin
Until someone tells us about
God
The only way to be free from sin..

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The way of the mind

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Written on September 24, 2021

Submitted by doreenefelder191 on September 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCADEAFGHIJKLMK
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 513
Words 102
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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