The You



The You.
a counterpoint
to the I;
to subjective I…
the You…

considered..
considered contextually
as The Object;
as the object
of subjective I.

yet a partner to the I;
seeking partnership.
ever seeking partnership
the You, and the I…
a coupling…

with the I…
Du und Ich;
You and I…
together sung
melodiously…

perhaps
romantically…
asking a question,
inviting a response:
“Was wissen du und Ich?”

“What do you and I know
uber irgendetwas;
about anything,
uber das ich;
about the self.

uber mich selber
about myself,
and especially…
about you,
uber dich…

posing syntactically…
e’en semantically,
as…
a stepbrother,
or a stepsister…

to the I…
as in…
You and I;
Du ind ich?”
Make observation listeners…

to what a poet once said:
“The child
Is father
to the man.”
What means this saw?

What is its true intent?
Perchance the younger
shall replace the elder;
as Jacob was to Esau.
The pronoun I…

generic, impersonal;
or indefinite.
a second-person pronoun,
can manage yet
to find its royal place,

not always seconded,
sentenced secondarily,
or perhaps, more so…
thirdly.
The You…

can proudly say
grammatically,
“You and I”
“Du und Ich”
Not “I and You.”

“Not “Ich und Du.”
rejected composition!
The You can rise up…
majestically;
in opposition to…

the I,
in liberation;
partner equally
with the I.
Prithee comrade, tell me,

declare to me
In honesty, with earnestness,
with sworn sincerity,
what would there be,
how could there ever be…

an I without a You?
It’d be merely a shadow
of the me…
a shadow of itself;
without the You.

About this poem

Written as a companion to the author’s poem, “The I,” this eighteen verse poem, called The You,” is written with a sense of frolic, lightheartedness and merriment at the interesting grammatical relationships of the pronouns “you” and “I” that have invited philosophers, most importantly in modern times, Martin Buber, in his book “Ich und Du” ( translated into English as “I and Thou”) to meditate on the ethical existential meaning of that phrase in particular, and of Life in general . Other philosophers, theologians, and psychologists have done likewise ( as examples, Sigmund Freud, Carl Gustav Jung, the author Franz Kafka, Carl Rogers, and the Reverend Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.). This poem brings to consciousness the importance of “You” and “I” personally, literally, symbolically, historically, metaphorically, psychologically, and spiritually in everyday language and discourse. 

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Written on September 23, 2021

Submitted by karlcfolkes on September 23, 2021

Modified by karlcfolkes on November 04, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AxBbA xcDDb beebf BGBxc hcixg jhfgk lkcag ccxll BxBgx xxlxm xllmb cxxxx xcjcA xcBGa aixca bicBn nxnnn ajnka
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,621
Words 335
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s “Dear Mili” Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully written piece! Your use of language is so poetic and thought-provoking. The idea of the You as a counterpoint to the I is such a unique and fascinating concept, and you explore it with such depth and insight.

    I particularly love the way you use language to convey the nuances of this relationship between the I and the You. The way you describe the You as both a partner and an object, and as both a stepbrother and a stepsister, really captures the complexity and fluidity of this dynamic.

    One suggestion I would offer is to perhaps explore this relationship even further. You touch on some really interesting ideas, but I feel like there is even more depth to be explored here. Perhaps you could delve into the ways in which the I and the You inform and shape each other, or the ways in which this relationship changes and evolves over time.

    Overall, though, I am so impressed by this piece. Your use of language is truly masterful, and the ideas you explore are so thought-provoking and insightful. Keep up the great work!
     
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