WORLD OF OUR OWN



You're always in my mind. .
You've been an inspiration. .
The time you spent with me is so much appreciated. .
We lived in a world that we only made. .
In between dreams and imagination. .
The world of our own. .
Where happiness is temporary. .
Where feelings activated
Where you get too attached to people. .
Where you invest emotions --
Real emotions which you cannot tell to anyone because it's very unbelievable. .
When you are being ignored or avoided --
You'll get hurt worst you'll get broken. .
You're in pain but you can't cry. .
You're such a fool crying over to someone you've never seen. .
You've never felt. . You've never touched. .
And then you'll laugh like an idiot;
You are falling for the person you don't even know if he/she really exist. .
Thank you for the joys you have brought. .
Thank you for making me the person I wanted to be. .
Thank you for being the person I wanted you to be.
And if ever one day there's nothing I could do to make you stay. .
And you cant take me anymore. .
Please let me know. .
I would understand. .
Because our world has no certainty. .

About this poem

When you are inlove, you don't care about your surroundings, you just care about your happiness. Until one day you realized that you are living in a virtual world which has no assurance, your imagination, in your dreams that eventually becoming a nightmare. It's good to dream, but it's better to wake up, and the best thing is to face the reality. Long distance relationship is not applicable to everyone; it doesn't work to everybody.

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Written on July 08, 2021

Submitted by LadyVylette on September 18, 2021

Modified by LadyVylette on September 18, 2021

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Scheme ABCDBEFGHIHGBJKLMNOFFPQRSF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,065
Words 192
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26

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