This feeling of an empty space inside



This feeling of an empty space inside
my chest is real. The hollow left by you
when we did part still holds the tears we cried
 beside the memories we made. I knew
good-bye was hard. I knew that you I’d miss.
I know this is not love- too soon for that.
I want your hands, your arms, your thoughts, your kiss,
your laugh, your kindness, to have one more chat.
I want what could have been if we’d more time
together. More than that, I want you, Man,
to see yourself as I see you: a fine
and wonderful person, NEVER less than.
Love yourself first, that’s what I want for you,
also to soar like I know you can do.
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Written on 2021

Submitted by M-Sten on September 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

36 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABABCDCDEFGFBB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 602
Words 122
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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