130



What hair he has upon his head is gray,
and where none grows his pate reflects the light.
The cigarettes he smokes, a pack each day,
Infuse their scent across his ample height.
He does not have the body of a god,
nor does he have the stamina of youth.
He early retires for the night. He’s flawed.
He puts sticks up his nose: he’s quite a goof.
The scars he carries on body and heart
run deeper in him than their marks suggest.
The damage they’ve caused him to stop this start.
His fear to himself he finally confessed.
Yet all of these “defects” make him much more real
than any imagined or dreamt “ideal.”
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Written on 2021

Submitted by M-Sten on September 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABABCDEFGHGHII
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 608
Words 117
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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