Always on my mind.

allwyn lobo 1975 (bombay)



Always on my mind
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You are not just another woman, you are someone dear to me.
I treasure all the times we shared, you are the best that could ever be.
so happy we were those few days together, besides each other we laid.
You laughed and you cried with me by your side I wish you could always stay.

But suddenly something went wrong my dear, I really don't have a clue.
So happy we were at the dawn of the year but something went wrong with you.

Was is something I said or did what bitterness turned you blind.
But even though you left me so far, you are still always on  my mind.

About this poem

Wrote this after my first breakup. Those silly young years

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Written on October 02, 2001

Submitted by allwyn_l on September 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BBXX CC AA
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 605
Words 117
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 2, 2

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