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Flat note

joanna scott 1967 (Birmingham)

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The music died in me
the day you left with out a good bye
the tears never stop rolling
as silent days now pass me by
Suddenly like a stranger
dancing to my own tune
I never thought I'd lose you
my dancing man on the moon
Now there is only a silence
that leaves a icy chill
the music died in me
and hasn't returned still

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This poem that just came to mind when i decided I was going to write a new book in 2017

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Written on February 17, 2017

Submitted by Joanna1967 on September 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AbcbdefeghAh
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 315
Words 67
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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