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Awaken her heart

joanna scott 1967 (Birmingham)

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Her heart it needs awakening
it's tired though asleep
her lips untouched her tears run dry
she know longer sits too weep
The dreams had stopped so suddenly
like you are no longer there
just a silent whisper
in a world, that's forgot how to care
You leave her alone and empty
you left her waiting around
your the reason she walked away
and he's the reason she's found

About this poem

I wrote this a few years ago about a love that never worked because he kept the girl waiting when she met some one new he couldn't understand why

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Submitted by Joanna1967 on September 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCBDEFEDGHG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 361
Words 69
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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