Smoke Rings

Dan S. English 1953 (Texas)



Buy me a cigar, my ever patient friend,
and listen while my heart builds a darkened room
to hold the smoke.
Then we’ll wait ‘til the rolling clouds have settled to the floor
and I can clearly see whose there, or not,
Until the rings we blew into the mist
come round again to show their chang’ed form,
so near to what we once were,
so far from what we’d hoped for.

About this poem

In 2000, I believe, this poem won the Poetry.com bronze medal, as well as being an Editor’s Choice. I wrote this in 1985 or ‘86, as I mourned the end of my marriage.

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Written on 1985

Submitted by denglish1018 on September 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 364
Words 72
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

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