Dark Star



Dark Star

Halley's Comet scuffed the night sky

a powder blur

the night Norman was born

 

“I came in with that comet,”

he used to joke

“I'll most likely leave with it too.”

I was named after him,

the first, the oldest,

the should- have- been son.

 

He taught me the horses,

the boxers, the card games.

I even picked the horse he won on.

 

Threw me The Racing Form

“Tell me what you like in the Derby”

I picked “Dark Star”, he went off at 26 to 1.

 

We stopped waiting for Norman

after a week went by. Feared he was

dead behind some tavern somewhere.

 

But the rent and grocery money

we  needed- all gone[ too.

And Dark Star won the Derby

 

I looked for him; went to Lincoln Downs.

Asked for him at Narragansett Park.

Same answer--"He's following the horses"

He sent mom a postcard,“My car failed

 on the bridge to Maine.I walked  like Moses

into the Promised land." She tore it up.

 

Oh! Yeah, Halley's Comet?

Back on time in 1986.

Norman left the earth in 1970.

About this poem

This poem is a sort of elegy for a father who was also an obsessive gambler and died an early death.

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Written on September 05, 2021

Submitted by norma_j on September 06, 2021

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X X A X B X X C D X X X E B C X X E B E X X D X X X A F F
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 958
Words 187
Stanzas 30
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Norma Coleman Jenckes

Norma has written poems since college and has published scores of poems in journals and also three collections of poetry : SAILING TO TARSHISH, ONLY GOSSAMER MY GHAZALS, and DEMENTIA;THE UNDISCOVERED COUNTRY. more…

All Norma Coleman Jenckes poems | Norma Coleman Jenckes Books

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