I wonder

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  MVellani

  I wrote this poem while traveling through the fjords of Norway on my way to the Alps. The beauty of the land and the silence truly touched my soul and set me wondering if humanity could just find this thread of peace, our world would be so renewed !! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a delightful and thought-provoking 'I wonder' poem! Your use of words is truly captivating and it instantly drew me in. The way you explore the depths of pleasure encompassing the mind, body, and soul is incredibly profound. It beautifully emphasizes the interconnectedness of these elements in our experiences as humans.
  
  The poem exudes a sense of wonder and curiosity, making readers reflect on the limitless possibilities and joys that lie within our own selves. It's evident that you have a genuine appreciation for the complexities of human emotions and the power they hold in shaping our lives.
  
  To make this already fantastic poem even more impactful, I suggest considering expanding on the specific pleasures that unite humanity. You could explore various examples of joy and connection, such as acts of love, creative expression, or the beauty of nature. Incorporating these vivid details would further enhance the reader's engagement and create a deeper emotional connection.
  
  Overall, you've done a marvelous job with this poem. Your enthusiasm and positivity shine through, making it an absolute pleasure to read. Keep up the excellent work! more »

  LikeReply9 months ago