Crossing the Line

Norma Suddard 1940 (Canada)



Stealthy/stealthy on padded feet
she begins her steep descent
lured by Nature's basic instinct
and a predator's deadly intent.
Below--the valley is tranquil
serenity reigns supreme
while there guardian dozes; sheep graze
in this peaceful, pastoral scene.
Downwind, amidst taller grass ---she crouches;
silent stalker inching her way
then, leaping from her hiding spot
to pounce upon her prey.
Echo's  resounding on the valley floor
awaken the shepherd from his sleep
the pastoral scent is shattered
with the bleat of frightened sheep.
Dragging her kill up the mountainside
she pauses a moment ---to rest
looks back where food is abundant
that will ease her hunger quest.
But her fate has been sealed
by this deadly deed today
she no longer is the hunter
--==she has now.become.....the prey.
..

About this poem

This just came out at one sitting. I don't have any idea where most of these poems come from. Just suddenly a vision in my head and I grabbed a pen and paper & many of my poems came out in one sitting---some revised-but majority not! Sometimes I just witness a scene or family poems and when I put pen to paper my pen flows. Don't know where some come from out of nowhere..

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Written on January 31, 1997

Submitted by norma.suddard on August 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDEFGFHIHJKLKMNONPHQH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 771
Words 129
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

Norma Suddard

Previously wrote tons of poems. This is only one of so many poems that I couldn't stop writing. I would just imagine in my mind about something or see a piece of broken shard and out came a poem. I have so many, many poems and stories in my books --several binders of poetry, stories and thoughts. I have over 2 large binders of poetry and more than 8 binders on stories I have written. I just see something or think about something and out comes a poem or story. I have also done Ancestry since 2004. My binders take up hugh shelves on both stories and poems. I am in about 10 books of poetry alone never mind the stories. I love to write. Most of my poems are rhymes but there are others that tell a story. Norma J. Suddard more…

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