Miner's Mischance



Beside the swiftly moving waters
crouched a shoddy, filthy man
grimy fingernails racked the sand
as he skimmed......his mining pan.
Features hidden behind a scraggly beard
and a hat with a ragged brim
patched woolen breeches ---an old torn coat
boots with soles worn thin.
He rubbed his myopic eyes
and surveyed the creek's bottom bed
Perhaps ---somewhere upon the ridge
was a better place---instead.
Nearby in a grove, a grey mule strood
munching on dew filled grass
carried o'er --a mountain pass.
Picking his meagre possessions
he began the trek upstream
searching for ---the Mother Lode
every miner's dream.
But fame and fortune eluded him
had his eyes not grown--so weak
he would have seen the riches that lay
on the opposite---side of the creek.

written by me Norma J Suddard
June 3 1997

an idea as I sat 'beside the watder's of Mission Creek Kelowna British Columba
Many of my poems like this one came out in one sitting.
TRUE
Beautiful scenic place stirred my imagination for this poem and it took  off.  Norma J. Suddard

About this poem

I wrote this on a vacation in British Columbia as I sat beside the water's of Mission Creek. It was a beautiful scenic place and stirred my imagination for this and it just took off. It was like I saw it in my mind as I looked at the creek and this poem came out.

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Written on January 31, 1997

Submitted by norma.suddard on August 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABAXCXXXDXDBEEXFXFCGXG BX XXXB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,004
Words 179
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 23, 2, 4

Norma Suddard

Previously wrote tons of poems. This is only one of so many poems that I couldn't stop writing. I would just imagine in my mind about something or see a piece of broken shard and out came a poem. I have so many, many poems and stories in my books --several binders of poetry, stories and thoughts. I have over 2 large binders of poetry and more than 8 binders on stories I have written. I just see something or think about something and out comes a poem or story. I have also done Ancestry since 2004. My binders take up hugh shelves on both stories and poems. I am in about 10 books of poetry alone never mind the stories. I love to write. Most of my poems are rhymes but there are others that tell a story. Norma J. Suddard more…

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