with you



I was with you to end
I stood by you all the way
on my time on your time
even when I was away
I never looked down on you
or made you feel out of place
you broke my heart in so many places
so many pieces you tore apart
but, I look the other way
because you had my heart
you made me feel good that day
I felt special in every part
on good days you would sometimes hold my hand
on bad days you would make cry
I never understood why you did me the way you did
but, I prayed to God so that
 I will forgive you
for acting like a kid for being irresponsible
and treating me like ****
You actually did me a favor because it
help me to growth into the person that I
needed to be in order to become spiritually
and I Thank you because that's the day I woke up
in peace made me feel like I was in heaven and everything begin all over for me a second chance that
God gave me and now I'm not in sorrow for tomorrow
im in peace and Joy and love and I will be like this for
a lifetime as follow I'm a beautiful soul and everything happens within for the goodness of me

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a little personal and emotional

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Written on August 22, 2021

Submitted by Ke'Millinnieum36 on August 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDEFGBGBGHIJKDLMNIOPKQRO
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,038
Words 225
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27

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