Tread lightly, and do not leave a mark

Richard Daish 1949 (DocPenfro)



It's a lonely path that I must travel
But it's not far from the peace.
The endings of my life unravel;
The noises round me cease.

Beneath my feet the sand and gravel
Bear the marks of no-one's tread.
Far beyond their clamourous cavil
Alone, I face the fear and dread.

Across the clearing stands the shamble
Of a house, once straight and tall.
Roofless, doorless, o'er grown with bramble
Yet my heart still hears its call.

I push my way inside this place,
and lay down on its floor.
The rain falls gently on my up-turned face,
But now, I can feel it no more.

About this poem

This came to me one dark night.

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Written on January 08, 1998

Submitted by richard.daish on August 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB ACAC ADAD EFEF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 543
Words 106
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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