Tread lightly, and do not leave a mark
It's a lonely path that I must travel
But it's not far from the peace.
The endings of my life unravel;
The noises round me cease.
Beneath my feet the sand and gravel
Bear the marks of no-one's tread.
Far beyond their clamourous cavil
Alone, I face the fear and dread.
Across the clearing stands the shamble
Of a house, once straight and tall.
Roofless, doorless, o'er grown with bramble
Yet my heart still hears its call.
I push my way inside this place,
and lay down on its floor.
The rain falls gently on my up-turned face,
But now, I can feel it no more.
About this poem
This came to me one dark night.
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Written on January 08, 1998
Submitted by richard.daish on August 20, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABAB ACAC ADAD EFEF |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 543 |
Words | 106 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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