Magical woods



Once  lonely i stood

In a deep magical wood

No one  near me

As i felt the longing for food

I started crying as i missed my mother

I love you mom i said with a stutter

I built up some courage

Took my bag as if it was my luggage

Wore a warm and comfortable hood

As i tried to figure my way out

Of the magical wood

While walking i saw a dog

In between of the mystical fog

The dog looked familiar  

It took me a second

But then i figured out that was the spirit of my mother

I hugged the dog and I moved on

Then i realised it was almost time for dawn

I was standing there and it felt like the woods were eating me as food

Oh! I advise you to never visit the magical woods .

written by Rahul Vij

About this poem

This poem is about a lost , inocent child .... Figuring his way out of the magical woods

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Written on August 12, 2021

Submitted by diya_v on August 18, 2021

Modified on May 04, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A X B C C D D A X A X X C X C X X B X D
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 685
Words 148
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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