Try harder



Try harder....

Pull me down and I will fly high
To the horizon in the light blue sky
Where expectations meet reality
You will get rid of  any superficiality
Riding on the wave of  immense tranquility..

Stop me now and I will cross
Sea ,Bridge and forest like a hedgehog
Where everything is calculated in the gross
The successes and failures go for a toss
All that remains is beauty and its gloss

Push me away and I will bounce back
To the lovely life that's lying in the stack
Where your existence is always on attack
Collecting , arranging in my backpack
All the self worth that's  lying in the rack

Accept me with open arms and i will be indebted
Forgetting all  that you have till now netted
Cherishing the broken threads and weaving the bed
To lie and rest after the life i have sweated
Awaiting in repose and apprehension to be jetted....

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Motivation and positive feeling

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Written on August 01, 2021

Submitted by yogitayamini on August 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBB CXXCC DDDDD XEXEE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 823
Words 155
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5

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