Amid the Clouds I Sat



Early morning.
Drops of dew.
The clouds of a gray hue.
I imagined beautiful flowers
And that I flew.
A chill,
A thrill.
I relaxed deep in the heavens,
Amid the clouds I sat.
I saw the sun
Shining through.
I saw a jet
Shining blue.
Upon my palm
A flower rested.
I remained calm.
My life was a trial,
I remained in denial.
I clenched the flower,
I pulled each petal
One by one.
A petal shower,
I saved one,
I answered one.
Did I fail in my life?
No, but I sailed over strife.

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From: I AM A MAN AS I SHOULD BE: POEM BOOK 1, on amazon

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Submitted by RonaldBunch on August 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABBCBDDEFGBHBIJIKKLKGLGGMM
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 448
Words 96
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26

Ronald-Bunch

ronaldbunch.com He did volunteer work, goes to church, reads, and likes long walks. He's a self published writer and poet. He's getting his GED and will graduate at Grand Rapids (USA) community college. Activity: Ronald Lee Bunch published his poetry book called I Am A Man As I should be on create space September 1st, 2014 (Paper Back) and August 31, 2014 (Kindle Edition) Audio book is now available at amazon. Interests: Writing, reading, walking. Favorite book types: Fantasy and writer/author biographies. Some of the books he read: Mainspring (Clockwork Earth #1), The Magician's Nephew (Chronicles of Narnia), The Holiness of God, The Outsiders, Clash of the Titans, Gulliver's Travels, Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Harry Potter #2), The Four Signs of a Dynamic Catholic, Crossfire, Outland, Krull, The Red King (Star Trek: Titan, #2), Icerigger #1, Spellsinger, Flinx's Folly (Pip & Flinx #9), Battle Surgeons (Star Wars: Clone Wars, #4), The Silmarillion, The Lord of The Rings, The Hobbit, David Copperfield. more…

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