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you!

florrà 2001 (Philippines)

my soul is floating
like a thin paper dancing
i took off my defense
condoning their eager glances  
fangs like hyenas, ready to use their claws
human is no picture-book, aware of its own flaws
folks! be open for what you have!
wear it enticingly like a mellow mauve
divert your eyes to the mat of envious
walk directly to your own path for that would be marvelous!
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Written on August 01, 2021

Submitted by florrà on August 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABCDDEFGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 357
Words 68
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
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