Can we?

Jasmine 2004 (Antipolo)



Hello turns to hi
Enemy turns to ally
Gray skies turns to blue skies
As we look to each other's eyes

After that we became so shy
Our feelings that we can't verify
So at the end we deny
Even though there's a butterfly

But I want to go back and revise
Because now I realize
That our decisions were unwise
So can we counterclockwise ?

About this poem

This poem is about a two young ones that have this kind of strange feelings for each other but neglected it. Then the other one wants to go back at that time where they still have a chance to confess it.

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Written on November 29, 2020

Submitted by on August 01, 2021

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB AAAA BBBB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 320
Words 65
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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