I CAN’T SLEEP



I CAN’T SLEEP

I can’t sleep
I can’t sleep
I’m retreating
I’m falling
My deep
inside is struggling
I can’t sleep
I can’t sleep

I can’t sleep
My mind is deeply troubling
Deep inside me is agonising
I’m in  agony deep
I can’t sleep
I can’t sleep

Regrets and conscience aside
turmoils and turbulence abide
I’m hurting inside
My hurt is deep
and I am bleak
I can’t sleep
I can’t sleep

However much I try
I retreat even more deep,
my demons alight even more.
Even if I weep
I can’t sleep
I can’t sleep

About this poem

Bereavement, anguish, guilt, insomnia, suffering , trying to find peace and Solace

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Submitted by badal.pal on July 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A AAbbabAA AbbaAA cccaxAA xaxaAA
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 520
Words 96
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 6, 7, 6

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