Tell me you love me

Mischa such 2005 (South)



Tell me you love me
Even when you feel
like giving up

Tell me you love me
When things arent going
The way as planned

Tell me you love me
With all the scars
Mapped on my skin

Tell me you love me
Even when the world
Starts breaking me down

Tell me you love me
When my pillow
Drains all my tears
When touched in the morning

Tell me you love me
When my eyes
Resemble a broken child

Tell me you love me
When my hands
Starts shaking
like a tambourine

Tell me you love me
When my heartbeat
Sounds like heavy footstep

But dont tell me you love me

When you cant see all my scars,

My puffy eyes soaked with tears

My pale body shaking from the cold

Or when my clothes dont fit me

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Written on May 23, 2021

Submitted by mischasuch on July 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

42 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axx Abx Acx Axx Axdb Axx Axbx Axx a c d x a
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 663
Words 140
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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