Lost hope



Evenings we used to watch the sun stooping
There's no dawn in my days after I lost you

Trees we used to watch 'em dancing
They are too gloomy to move

Birds we used to listen 'em singing
They disbanded their gig out of despair

The breeze is dull
hymns makes no sense
nights are lifeless

Won't you just comeback?
I know
You won't..

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A short poem about my heartbreak

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Written on July 21, 2021

Submitted by poetryvishwas on July 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX AX AX XXX XXX XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 412
Words 79
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 3, 3, 2

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