Take The Sunshine, Leave The Rain

Alan S Jeeves 1951 (Lancashire)



If I could take my time again
A different thing I'd do;
I'd take the comfort, leave the pain,
Take the sunshine, leave the rain,
If only I could start anew.

If I could be another's son
A different path I'd choose;
I'd walk along, I wouldn't run,
I'd leave the sorrow, take the fun,
If only I could re-infuse.

If I could start another hour
A different way I'd go;
I'd take the sweetness, leave the sour,
Take the jolly, leave the dour,
If only I could make it so.

If I could live another day
I'd tread a different way;
I'd leave the turmoil, take the calm,
Leave the coarseness, take the charm,
If I could take my time again...
I'd take the sunshine, leave the rain.

About this poem

It was 1996 when this poem first saw the light of day.

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Submitted by AlanSJeeves on July 04, 2021

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Abccb dedde fgffg hhxxAc
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 645
Words 129
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 6

Alan S Jeeves

Alan S Jeeves is a Lancashire (England) born, Yorkshire based classical poet. more…

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