A Parallel world



Let’s rise together
In love
In our own beautiful parallel world,
Here we can be at our own
Away from harsh real zone
Where people & cold and dry
Where love suffocates, and rudeness is high

Let’s rise together
In love
In our own beautiful parallel world,
Here no one will tell us what is right
This is far from all the plights
Morning to start with a gentle kiss
Togetherness forever will be a bliss

Let’s rise together
In love
In our own beautiful parallel world,
Who will say here how to smile & talk?
to whom to love , with whom you walk
Who judge us even making love in the eaves
This is our own garden of Adam & eve

Let’s rise together
In love
In our own beautiful parallel world
Vixen sucking life out of her superman
It’s not awful but pleasant here
Real world never understand this
The place of love and eternal bliss

About this poem

Two lovers find it difficult in this world to stay together due to social issue, parent pressure and huge age difference in them and want to create a parallel world

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Written on July 01, 2021

Submitted on July 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCddee ABCxfff ABCggfx ABCxxff
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 836
Words 158
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7

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