This Place:



I found a special place for me
It Consists of the beach, the sky, and the sea
A place full of peace and clarity
A space I fill with integrity.

A place my heart rings true and free
And the place you’ll find my mind’s key
The only place you may truly understand me
A place you’ll see my true personality

If you throw a pebble in that sea
It’s path will ripple and you no longer see
The image of my special place clearly
It is a place I now want you to see
So please don’t destroy it with negativity

A place you can enjoy the view
A place you can find something new
A place where the people I let in are few
The place I learned many things and grew

A place my heart rings free and true
A place most people have never knew
A place Where I get my problems through
A place full of greens, whites, and blue

A place that my creativity runs free
A place I don’t always like what I see
The place I ask myself what I want to be
A place that doesn’t always have an answer for me

This place represents me
It's a place people rarely see
It’s the only place I am truly free
A place I now share with thee
A beautiful place I call ME.

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It is a personal poem that has a special message in it (I'm not to great at writing, so it is not the best, any constructive criticism would be nice, please and thank you)

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Submitted by s40087206 on June 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAAA AAAA AAAAA BBBB BBBB AAAA AAAAA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,104
Words 232
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 5

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