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Devoted



Ignore all denial
while intoxicated with lust
soul’s love relinquished
lost amongst nightmares
Enduring deep pain
such remarkable touch
Disconnect from one’s feeling
caressed by another’s warmth
Continue holding tightly
delightfully tasting tears
Caviar of the body
in which they indulge on daily
Happy being together
closely wrapped around each other
Both sacrificing pleasure
still could not be apart
Dying inside crying out loud
Pure hearts must flow freely
Infinite everlasting progression
forever perpetually spinning
Indefinitely alive living
a story but no ending
The two will prevail in life
Devoted lovers that never die

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It's about two lovers in their own world. They remain together through life and death.

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Submitted by Nathan55Hitson on June 16, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIDIIJJJKLIMGGGNO
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 634
Words 94
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

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