"Villanelle take 2"



Mr. B made me throw out my writing
He called it very offensive
Today's first period was not to my liking

He cut me off as I was reciting
My anger was extensive
Mr. B made me throw out my writing

My rage was igniting
Mr. B was very oppressive
Today’s first period was not to my liking

So here I am rewriting
I am writing this on the counteroffensive
Mr. B made me throw out my writing

My anger is slowly subsiding
So this poem will be inoffensive
Mr. B made me throw out my writing
Today’s first period was not to my liking

About this poem

This poem is a Villanelle. I wrote this while being very angry at my language arts teacher for making me throw out my old poem.

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Submitted by s28024255 on June 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Aba abA abA abA abAA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 511
Words 105
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 4

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