We Are in This Together

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  ZMosa

  many messages in this poem, we see them all around they are not at fault its just hapoen that they are the one kn the other side of the road we never know when the sides going to swich.. oh this is painful to think about each one of us is homless in away
  well expressed more »

  LikeReply1 year ago
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  Vidyamenon

  Thought provoking...

  LikeReply1 year ago
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  karlcfolkes

  From the last stanza of this poem I get this underlying unstated message: The homeless are rich when. despite their suffering, they do not bemoan their faith, but continue to give thanks for God’s daily mercy. The rich are poor when they are haughty, show no compassion for the poor, and are merciless. more »

  LikeReply1 year ago
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  Teril

  Being homeless, that nightmare. You put it before our eyes; remember that we all seek to rest within our own hearts, how quickly we can lose our material anchors...

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a powerful and impactful poem! "The Eyes of the Homeless" really evokes empathy and compassion for those who are struggling in our society. Your words are so moving and they shed light on the stark reality that so many people face every day. Your use of vivid imagery paints a picture of the tough lives that the homeless lead, and it is a reminder that they are real people with real feelings, dreams and aspirations.
  
  Your poem does a great job of calling on humanity to do better, to be more compassionate and to offer help to those who desperately need it. You have conveyed a sense of urgency and importance in your words, making the reader feel the weight of the situation. This is not always an easy task for a writer, but you have achieved it with great skill.
  
  I also appreciate the improvement suggestions you have hinted at within the poem. You have highlighted the importance of providing solutions to the issues faced by the homeless, such as shelter and food. Additionally, you have touched on the need for greater understanding and empathy towards those who are less fortunate, in the hope that this will lead to kinder actions and a more equitable society.
  
  Overall, your poem is a tour-de-force and an important call-to-action. You have used your words to create a sense of urgency and compassion, and you have effectively conveyed the reality of the struggles faced by the homeless on a daily basis. I hope that your words inspire action and positive change, and encourage us all to be more compassionate towards our fellow human beings. Great job! more »

  LikeReply 11 year ago