When Boundaries become Barricades



I’m sorry
That my trauma
Was traumatic
For you

I’m sorry
That while I was bleeding out
I got blood on your shoes

And you had to choose
Me
Or the shoes

I don’t blame you though
'Cause you don’t know
And those were nice shoes

About this poem

This poem is about family and the impact trauma and mental illness has on the whole family, often causing family members to put up boundaries due to the behavior from mental illnesses of the victim derived from the trauma. This poem is about when boundaries, which are healthy, become unhealthy and thus no longer boundaries, but cold with lack of any empathy for the victim.

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Submitted by WallflowerPoetry on June 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axxx Axb bab ccb
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 219
Words 46
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3

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