Healthy expectations.



A cute stood with her eyes down,
Slowly rising her eyelids,
To make a sharp look,
Then falls down her eyelids,
Making the exceptions
With in herself,
And made an attractive smile,
To feel better with in herself,
Raised her head and eyes,
I liked the way of her watching,
And inspecting her in one look,
I could feel the lotus blooming,
To salute her with grace,
I was unable to remove my eyes,
From her beauty and simpleness,
From her spill binding cute eyes,
I prayed for the time to stop,
Then and there by itself............

About this poem

Generally a poet writes with exceptions and tries to bring a fantasy into his mind and Penn's down. The same situation with this poem. That's all.

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Submitted by brijmohan_p on June 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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