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I Came To See Your Smile.

Teresa Whitney 1951 (Tacoma)

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I walked about a mile today,
I came to see your smile,
I was feeling some what down,
Yet, I felt you all the while,

I know there is this special place,
In which we call our own,
Here where no one else comes,
When we are alone,

I love to come here every day,
Even though I may not,
Just to feel you touching me,
Your love is what I sought,

I so enjoy this time we have,
Just the two of us,
If only in words, and such,
My love to you confessed,

I would walk another mile,
Just to be with you,
Because you see my darling,
It is you I love so true.

About this poem

This poem is about the love one has for another.

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Written on June 05, 2021

Submitted by jennybabygirl6982_1 on June 04, 2021

Modified on April 21, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB XCXC AXXX XXXX BDXD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 525
Words 117
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
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Teresa Whitney

Born and raised in Washington State as well as growing up in S. California, I now reside in Mooresville N. C. for the past 20 yrs. A wife for 30 yrs before loosing my late husband, a mother of 2 son's , grandmother of 6 children & great grandmother of 2 . College educated with an AA in Drug and Alcohol Counseling. A past owner of 2 state licensed board and care homes for the elderly. I have traveled the U.S. over and settled in North Carolina. My family is here and new friends I have made over the years. I am an avid Poetry writer enjoying all styles of Poetry, looking forward to having my 1st Poem book published soon. more…

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