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I BURN FOR YOU.... ( MEDICO VERSION)

Debbie 2000 (Tamilnadu)



To the man I love the most in the whole world,

There is no comparison on this Earth to your big heart

I’m in love with your tall form and your mean demeanour.

U have the cutest scowl.

I didn't know men can look this hot when they are fuming with anger.

Yet beneath this intimidating man is the softest heart that only a few people can see.

I’m lucky to have seen your shade of mellow

Love is nothing but a neurochemical reaction in medicine

Our first love is medicine. So we believed in it so far.

But do you know what happens when a person experiences the magical reaction for the first time in 20 years of existence?

Do you have any idea how my hormones go gaga for you?

Do you know that my eyes brim with tears when I see you because of the intense magic you create?

Tears of love, longing and passion ...

Never did I know that the pangs of love can be this gleeful

Do you know how my neurohypophysis storms with oxytocin when I see you?

When your ocean eyes pierce into mine, do u have any idea how I have a brain and heart freeze?

Your ocean gaze freezes into and icicle and pierces my heart so hard
that I develop severe tachycardia

No. Butterflies in stomach is not only because of irritable bowel syndrome

It occurs to me whenever your alluring form walks past me

Have you ever seen someone get coveted over a coffee mug?

But I envy your mug because it gets to touch your lips

Do you remember the time when you first held my hand?

It was like a surge of electricity pass through my body and I wish that this current never stops flowing through me

Do you know the disgust I feel when men touch my hand even by accident that I have the urge to cleanse my hands?

But why is my damn hand longing to hold yours forever?

Why is my body longing to merge with yours?

Do you know how much hatred I have for Homo sapiens?

Do u know my strong despise for love?

But why are all my beliefs and principles that I built for the past years getting destructed when I see you?

U have broken the barriers of my heart and managed to enter it just by being you? I will never forgive u for that.

Do you have any idea how angry I’m with myself to have fallen in the prison of love?

Do you know how arrogant I am and never listen to people?

Do you know how egocentric and self- centered I am?

But why do I nod my head like I suffer from titubation even when you tell me that the brain is situated in the ribcage?

Why doesn’t my ego stroke me even when you defeat me with your witty sarcasm?

Why do I never get tired of your crabby attitude?

Why do I feel that the room temperature raises by a degree with when you are yelling at me?

Are you some sort of mystic?

Your passion for the profession and knowledge of medical books wanna make me drown in you so that I can absorb some by osmosis

Everything in medicine is factual and right

But the explanation of love in books is wrong

It is not just a chemical reaction

My adrenaline, oxytocin, serotonin and cortisol are secreted at the same time. No this is not in your medical textbook. Don’t search for it.

I have the pride that I proved a medical concept wrong now

Maybe my love for you is cupid's revenge for despising love all my life?

But how can I say no to such a sweet punishment given to me?

I may have a smaller heart compared to yours

But my love for you is unimaginably huge that neither of us can imagine

When everything about you is big, why don’t you do me a small favor of loving me back?

Will you let me do the honor of introducing your blood to the world?

The world needs many people like you to make it a better place to live in

Thank you for making me see the world through your eyes

Thank you for erasing the darkness in my life

Yup I’m dark and twisted

I know that you have your own part of flaws and that you are imperfect in many ways

But I always fill your flaws with gold and witness it as something valuable

Even your flaws are adorable

U seem to make being imperfect a norm to me

U have your own ups and downs in life

I thought that I was so done with my life and my heart cannot stand any more problems as well as success.

But I’m now thrilled to be a part of your quotient of success and problems.

And I feel my heart strong enough to stand any problem that comes my way ‘cause I have you by my side

You are the reason for my pneumotaxic centre functioning normally

You better make my neural functions intact by just by being there for me

There is no one I want by my side in my life

My whole existence is for you and you only


Yours lovingly,

a psychopathic medical geek















To the man i love the most in the whole world,

There is no comparison on this Earth to your big heart

I’m in love with your tall form and your mean demeanour.

U have the cutest scowl.

I didn't know men can look this hot when they are fuming with anger.

Yet beneath this intimidating man is the softest heart that only a few people can see.

I’m lucky to have seen your shade of mellow

Love is nothing but a neurochemical reaction in medicine

Our first love is medicine. So we believed in it so far.

But do you know what happens when a person experiences the magical reaction for the first time in 20 years of existence?

Do you have any idea how my hormones go gaga for you?

Do you know that my eyes brim with tears when I see you because of the intense magic you create?

Tears of love, longing and passion ...

Never did I know that the pangs of love can be this gleeful

Do you know how my neurohypophysis storms with oxytocin when I see you?

When your ocean eyes pierce into mine, do u have any idea how I have a brain and heart freeze?

Your ocean gaze freezes into and icicle and pierces my heart so hard
that I develop severe tachycardia

No. Butterflies in stomach is not only because of irritable bowel syndrome

It occurs to me whenever your alluring form walks past me

Have you ever seen someone get coveted over a coffee mug?

But I envy your mug because it gets to touch your lips

Do you remember the time when you first held my hand?

It was like a surge of electricity pass through my body and I wish that this current never stops flowing through me

Do you know the disgust I feel when men touch my hand even by accident that I have the urge to cleanse my hands?

But why is my damn hand longing to hold yours forever?

Why is my body longing to merge with yours?

Do you know how much hatred I have for Homo sapiens?

Do u know my strong despise for love?

But why are all my beliefs and principles that I built for the past years getting destructed when I see you?

U have broken the barriers of my heart and managed to enter it just by being you? I will never forgive u for that.

Do you have any idea how angry I’m with myself to have fallen in the prison of love?

Do you know how arrogant I am and never listen to people?

Do you know how egocentric and self- centered I am?

But why do I nod my head like I suffer from titubation even when you tell me that the brain is situated in the ribcage?

Why doesn’t my ego stroke me even when you defeat me with your witty sarcasm?

Why do I never get tired of your crabby attitude?

Why do I feel that the room temperature raises by a degree with when you are yelling at me?

Are you some sort of mystic?

Your passion for the profession and knowledge of medical books wanna make me drown in you so that I can absorb some by osmosis

Everything in medicine is factual and right

But the explanation of love in books is wrong

It is not just a chemical reaction

My adrenaline, oxytocin, serotonin and cortisol are secreted at the same time. No this is not in your medical textbook. Don’t search for it.

I have the pride that I proved a medical concept wrong now

Maybe my love for you is cupid's revenge for despising love all my life?

But how can I say no to such a sweet punishment given to me?

I may have a smaller heart compared to yours

But my love for you is unimaginably huge that neither of us can imagine

When everything about you is big, why don’t you do me a small favor of loving me back?

Will you let me do the honor of introducing your blood to the world?

The world needs many people like you to make it a better place to live in

Thank you for making me see the world through your eyes

Thank you for erasing the darkness in my life

Yup I’m dark and twisted

I know that you have your own part of flaws and that you are imperfect in many ways

But I always fill your flaws with gold and witness it as something valuable

Even your flaws are adorable

U seem to make being imperfect a norm to me

U have your own ups and downs in life

I thought that I was so done with my life and my heart cannot stand any more problems as well as success.

But I’m now thrilled to be a part of your quotient of success and problems.

And I feel my heart strong enough to stand any problem that comes my way ‘cause I have you by my side

You are the reason for my pneumotaxic centre functioning normally

You better make my neural functions intact by just by being there for me

I burn for you

There is no one I want by my side in my life

My whole existence is for you and you only.


Yours lovingly,

a psychopathic medical geek
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