Shoot out that career. ( lyrical poem )

Brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



Shoot out that career......2......
From the bottom to top......2.....
Try to always make up..........2.......
Let, not the life flop........2.....

When you ask yourself,
That missing line,
Then you have to pay,
What's ever is the fine,

In that case, one has to sob.......12.....
Shoot out that career........

Every day at the end,
One must analyze,
Any unfair is done,
He must realize,

If not then, he is a cob.........12......
Shoot out that career.......

We must come over,
Our weak points,
Keeping always tight,
All the loose joint,

To keep running, like a gallop........12......
Shoot out that career..........
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Submitted by brijmohan_p on May 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abcb xdxd eA xfxf eA xxxx cA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 593
Words 104
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2

Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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  • Soulwriter
    This strikes me as the lyrics for a song :) Have you ever considered writing lyrics? You could post on the sister site - www.Lyrics.com
    LikeReply2 years ago

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