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Discipline master

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)

A twisted upper lip
A bite on the tongue
A forehead of wrinkles
A picture of gloom

A stick in a claw hand
Ragged and jagged on edge
Thrust back-forth ominously
A swish of a dark omen

Whack! Whish! Whash! Stick
Snap! Crack! Dark burns
Tears teeter on the eyes
Plonk! Plop! Of a teardrop

Tense immense in air
Agony crouches in vicinity
As one of our colleagues
Faces the crispy music

Snarling, sharply gazing
In fiery breath of dragon
Is the awful discipline master
An ugly hellish demon

Lethal!

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Submitted by GIDRAF on May 14, 2021

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Scheme AXXX XBCD EXXA XCXE XDXD B
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 489
Words 93
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
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