Analysis of Sunset Land



is coherence then finally
at the upper in our sight
like these gilt-edged cumuli
on which the last blazing light rides

are the old grieves soon forgotten
of those withheld freedom fights
from which brusque flashes fired
directed anger struck the ears
rage was thrashed with gusts
and sudden thunderbolts arose

the clouded air is clearing, while
semblance breaks off and shatters
the harsh rays graze the last rests
that won’t last even one more night
and resentment finally stops its fight


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Poetic Form
Metre 10101100 10100101 11111 11011011 10111010 1101101 1111010 01010101 11111 010101 01011101 1011010 0111011 11110111 0010100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 479
Words 82
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted by ludy_b on May 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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