Analysis of Opening lines of Eþandun: Epic Poem



Pour your glory, Lord, on the struggling king,
who by your hand ransomed the ravaged land;
illuminate the faces of your people,
who bled for you on every slaughterfield;
and kindle, Comforter, our uncouth hearts
that we may burn to do your will and earn
the blessings, not the curses, of our ancestors.
The pagan Danes had conquered the four kingdoms.
Clerics and kings, churls and thanes they’d slain,
while the living they plundered and enslaved.
Alfred, caked with the blood of friend and foe,
tasted the dregs of that envenomed horn,
but, granted faith and craft by our dear Savior,
he steeped old Godrum’s host in faith and fear
and steered the stubborn oarsmen from our soil. . .


Scheme ABCBDEFGHIJKLMN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101101001 111110101 01000101110 111111001 01010010111 1111111101 010101011010 01011100110 100110111 1010110001 1011011101 10011111 110101110110 111110101 0101011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 688
Words 118
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 541
Words per stanza (avg) 120
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Modified by davidb on September 05, 2021

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William G. Carpenter

I am an epic poet living in Minneapolis. My new epic poem about Alfred the Great's struggle with the invading Danes, just published by Beaver's Pond Press and illustrated by Miko Simmons, is available at www.williamgcarpenter.com and from Amazon.com, as well as local bookstores. more…

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