Analysis of Dam Filling Up



One would think of Aswan
Or the Three Gorges Dam

But here we are discussing
A dam a few metres wide
And a couple more metres long

And barely up to your waist
If you stood at the deepest part
The African rains
Were plentiful
This year

Even with the best rain
The dam doesn’t spill
It’s always a point to be made

This is a family dam
On the family property
Strange in a city…

But still pretty
Surrounded by grasses and reeds
Covered in water-lilies
The occasional heron
Stops by

Its slender grey neck –
A sight


Scheme AB XXX XXXXX AXX BCC CXXAX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 101101 1111010 0101101 00101101 0101111 11110101 01001 0100 11 101011 0111 1101111 1101001 10100100 10010 1110 01011001 1001010 0010010 11 11011 01
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 494
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 5, 3, 3, 5, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by speakalittlefr on April 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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