Analysis of Winds Of...



Seductive resignation fluttered scent
from fingertips which brushed love's cool power,
eyes reflected laughter with my ascent
as soft lips met and merged their warm flavour;
a kiss so tender in night's dark splendour
sent shivers of light through our tongue's torment,
and passion captured God's quiet lament
while hearts and minds were set free to conquer
anticipation's forceful wild dancer.

Ardour, alive within the present's smile,
enthusiastic skin rippled its tones
of beauty's waves down adrenaline's aisle,
two spirits' colours rode Heaven's cyclones
while angels gathered up silk petalled moans,
musical delight swam through strength; virile,
and lingered on curls of heat for awhile,
joy's whispers swept sensuality's groans.

With swirled wonder the dawn's quiet approach
saw bodies entwined on wisdom's threshold,
intensity still with fire's breath to poach,
it was not time for pleasure to unfold,
but to ride the winds of endearment; bold,
wondrous birdsong leapt from nature's stagecoach
as rhythmic melodies we aimed to broach.

A new morn had taken its sips of us
then fled towards another evening
where stars waited calmly for their sculptress
to wander in the future's notes that sing,
our orchestra spread out their feathered wings,
kept us safe in delicacy; ageless.

Consideration's twists of gentle sighs
stroked our open belief with welcome care,
souls combined inside fragrant lows and highs,
we relaxed on the curves of subtle prayers
and looked deep into each other's wide eyes.

The pianist is now in the realms of dreams,
awaiting the flow of our presence; light,
where in sleep we can pursue brand new themes
and once more in volcanic might unite.


Scheme ABABBAABB CDCDDXCD EFEFFEE GHDHXG IXIXI JKJK
Poetic Form
Metre 010010101 110111110 1010101101 111101111 011100111 1101111011 0101011001 1101011110 110110 10101011 001011011 111111 110111001 110101111 1000111110 0101111101 110111 1110011001 11001111 01001110111 1111110101 1110110101 10111101 1101001111 0111101111 110101010 111010111 1100010111 10100111101 1110100010 111101 11010011101 1010110101 1011011101 0110111011 00101100111 01001110101 1011101111 011001011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,635
Words 268
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Submitted on June 08, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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