Analysis of When he speaks



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I'm there with you
when you do the best I taught you
and feel like a loser still regardless
I've been there
I'm still there with you

I'm there with you
when you give your all as I prescribe
and it still ain't enough
I've been there
I'm still there with you

I'm there with you
when you speak so choiced words clearly
and is misunderstood yet
I've been there
I'm still there with you

I'm there with you
when the world choke you out lifeless
and you seem like no way out
I've been there
I'm still there with you

I'm there with you
when you are rejected to be dejected
and suicide seems the option
I've been there
I'm still there with you

No matter what you go through
Be it sad or joyful
as I indeed promised
I'd never leave or forsake you
I'm still there with you.

Regardless of what you go through, he is right there with you...The one and only Messiah will neither leave nor forsake you...You just gotta stay steadfast to His will. Please read, enjoy & be ministered to.


Scheme a BbcAB BxxAB BxxAB BcxAB BxxAB axxbB b
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1111 11101111 0110101010 111 11111 1111 111111101 011101 111 11111 1111 11111110 010011 111 11111 1111 10111110 0111111 111 11111 1111 11101011010 0101010 111 11111 1101111 111110 110110 11011011 11111 01011111111111101001011011011110111111101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 982
Words 194
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on August 26, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Roland 'KingShip' Ediare

I'm a man sold-out to The God of JesusChrist...I preach Him in & out of Season...-I I love life, laughter and being myself...I'm "BRASH"; usually not a 'respecter of persons'...I practically speak things as they are with a pragmatic intent. ...And I'm usually Very PASSIONATE about whatever I speak or do...lol ...Regarding my poetry: I usually put on a character and a subject that I'm passionate about...It brings me close to deliver my passion as the real characters would feel...As close as I can get if the 'subject' was me....someday 'Beyond the Sky' will be my reach. "Deo Volente!...Please Enjoy my poems, most of them are quite deep; so when you read try to get outside 'The Box'; because ...I write from outside the box...And Remain Blessed. Then before you rate Google the meaning of unknown word, you do not know it all...How do you fault what you do not understand...the burden of understanding is never on the giver of information, but on the recipient...Anyway thanks. more…

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