Analysis of When Dreams...
When Dreams...
When dreams die hope is lost
To the endless lies the sharp tongue whips out at us
When dreams die we are lost within our minds
When dreams are lost we crawl into a shell
Like a hermit crab waiting to find a new place
When dreams die so does our hopes fade
Our hopes fade as we let others rule our feelings
afraid to love to hope and dream for ourselves
We struggle to meet others expectations we can't meet
When dreams die and all hope is lost turn to me
For life is not really meant to be lived alone
Be it with your mother father friends or lover cling to them
I know now when dreams die leave the hurt from your past
To move along to find your purpose in life
Be it through actions, words or the love of self
For there is nothing greater than to love yourself
Then when dreams die it will only be in your dreams
For then and only then you'll learn to keep your hopes and dream alive
Marisol Rodriguez Velez
copy rights October 9,2013
Scheme | AXXX XXX XXX XXX XXB BAX XX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11 111111 101010111111 11111101101 1111110101 101011011011 111111011 10111111011010 011111011001 1101110010111 11101111111 111110111101 111110101110111 111111101111 11011111001 11110110111 111101011101 111111101011 1101011111110101 101001 101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 953 |
Words | 189 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 108 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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Submitted on October 15, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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