Analysis of When A Heart Is Broken



When A Heart Is Broken
by Fred M. Lassonde

For days and nights now I have wept

Sunshine or shadow does not matter

I gave my heart but it was not kept

Instead, like my mind, It was glass to shatter

Now as I sit here hurt and feeling blue

Even though I try I cannot forget you

Sure by now I am not even a memory

Yet, with a broken heart, I live this story

Nothing now will make the pain go away

I continue to exist broken day after day

With a heart, mind and soul that loves you

I go on knowing you will just do as you do

They say pride comes before a fall

Yet I wish you no hurt, no harm at all

Pray for you each and every day

For your well being, blessings in every way

Will end this now as my heart hurts so

My fingers move along these keys they do

typing this poem with hope you will know

No matter what I will always Love you!

©Fred Monte Lassonde 2014


Scheme XA A B A B C C D D E A C A F F A E G A G C A
Poetic Form
Metre 101110 1111 11011111 1111110 111111111 01111111110 1111110101 10111110011 111111100100 11010111110 1011101101 1010101101101 101101111 111101111111 11110101 1111111111 111101001 111101001001 111111111 1101011111 1011011111 110111111 1101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 834
Words 181
Sentences 3
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on May 09, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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