Analysis of waves!!!



Sitting on the shore,
With the musing sounds,
Of water molecules ,
Chanting an age old chorus,
To this age of the dynamics,
From the ages of rhinoceros,
I look beyond the sea,
At the zenith of the sky,
What must be there?
What does there lie.
O man! just look at the shore,
The rising tides are asking,
Can you also rise so high?
If you have the will,
Could go beyond the sky.
The dip in ways are telling me,
Can you go so deep in love?
Could you fall in love of thee?
A fruit of love you could reap,
Water is hitting the shore,
With power full thrust,
O the dwellers of land,
Overcome your lust,
Become kind n just,
You are the sand,
Driven out with waves,
Next wave will take you back,
You are just slaves..
The waves are waving for the heavens,
They will never die,
You  are exiled of heavens,
Day n night you will mourn,
Day n nights, have a cry………………….


Scheme ABCDEDFGHGAIGJGFKFLAMNMMNOPOQGQRG
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 10101 11010 1011110 11110010 101010100 110101 1010101 1111 1111 1111101 0101110 1110111 11101 110101 01011101 1111101 1110111 0111111 1011001 11011 101011 1011 01111 1101 10111 111111 1111 011101010 11101 111110 111111 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 847
Words 170
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 33
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 644
Words per stanza (avg) 171
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Submitted on July 12, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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