Analysis of Upon The Sand



One day I wrote her name upon the sand
But came the waves and washed it all away.
Again, I wrote it with a defter hand
But came the tide and made my script its prey.

You're vain, she said, that you in vain attempt
Immortalizing mortal thing as I.
Like sand-script, from decay I'm not exempt
So then my name be likewise wiped out dry.

Not right thought I; let lesser things devise
To yield to dust but she shall live in fame.
With rhyme, her merits I will eternalize
And to the heavens raise her splendid name.

Where, though demise shall all the world subdue,
Our love won't die and after life renew.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
Poetic Form Shakespearean sonnet 
Metre 1111010101 1101011101 011111011 1101011111 1111110101 0100010111 1111011101 111111111 1111110101 1111111101 11010111 0101010101 1101110101 10111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 586
Words 115
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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