Analysis of Unapproachable



Insensibly you let me come too close
To your excessively attractive being
And then just pushed away like thorny rose
Depriving me of chance to take another dose
Of your perfection I adore

So what the hell is happening to me?
I can't stop looking at your eyes
Endeavoring to thieve the heart
But it is unapproachable as if skies

So unapproachable, tender
I'll use my love to leave a mark
So unapproachable – flame of candle
Shows me the way outta the dark

You threw the glimpse towards my side
And went away with graceful walk
Your black reflection begotten by the night
Crept after as you were in the lantern's light
This place I cursed forever

So what the hell is happening to me?
I ripped apart my dolorous disguise
Endeavoring to thieve your heart
But it is unapproachable as if skies

So unapproachable, tender
I'll use my love to leave a mark
So unapproachable – flame of candle
Shows me the way outta the dark

Someday your heart will be surrendered
I know that


Scheme axxax BcdC EFGF xxhhe BcdC EFGF xx
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 11010001010 0111011101 010111110101 11010101 1101110011 11110111 01001101 1111111 1110 11111101 111110 11011001 11010111 01011101 11010010101 1101100011 1111010 1101110011 11011101 01001111 1111111 1110 11111101 111110 11011001 11111010 111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 942
Words 177
Sentences 3
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Den Khaustov

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