Analysis of Tu eras mi destino



Algo indefinible crecía en mi Corazón

No descriptible mas profundamente

Sensible ha los ojos del varón, forma

Correcta de amar un corazón, no existían

Las palabras para definir el amor, mañanas

De sabanas frescas en la habitación que daba

Exterior de la casilla que más bien parecía

Una choza toda vieja y descolorida, pintura

Avejentada que mas bien me agradaba por

Sentir el calido de tus caricias, algo fascinante

Ha mi mirada! Y me envolvían aquellos momentos

Que rehacían temblar el cuerpo, horas no sentidas

Días en los que pasaba el tiempo, como nada!

Donde aquellos instinto mas ocultos de tu

Ser me satisfacía como toda una mujer

Durante instantes cuando tus ojos fijaban

Los míos me daba cuenta que tus armas de seducción

Eran poderosas contra el corazón, y ha cada latir

Del tronco de la vida me enloquecías con tus

Pequeñas mordidas sobre el profundo del ombligo

Y las uvas saltaban jugando como el chiquillo

Con su juguete preferido! Del amor solo lo mas

Bello! Un olor exquisito ha hierba entraba por la venta

Abierta, aun recuerdo lo fresco de ello esta en mi mente

Es mi recuerdo! Tu cintura como de guitarra me atarantaba

Y sentía escuchar melodía con la danza de tus ojos, y entre

Lo sublime de tu cuerpo me perdía como quien se pierde

Entre caminos, quería escaparme del amor ha tiempo

Huyendo como un cobarde, sabiendo que tú eras mi destino.

Autora: Ana Pelayo.


Scheme A B C X D E C F F B D D B B F A A F D X X X B B E F B X A X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111 1111 10011111110 11011111011 11101110110 111111111 0100111111110 101101111 1111111 11111111 11010111111 111111111 111111111010 1111111 11101010101 01011111 1111111110111 111011111101 11111011111 11111111 111111011 1111110111 10111111111 1111101110111 11111101111 1101101110111110 10111111010111 10110111011 110111111011 110010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,436
Words 250
Sentences 7
Stanzas 30
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:15 min read
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Ana Pelayo

My name is Ana Pelayo, I was born in Autlan City in the the State of Jalisco Mexico to Florentino and Paz Pelayo by September 1st,1971.I strongly believe that I was born to be a poet, for I love poetry and enjoy writing poems, I wish to get close to the people's heart and give them a little bit of my knowledge as poet, for I believe that many of us we can write and think about the beautifully things that we can do, but not all of us can be a poet, Some of us we are trying to express our feelings and that's very good we think that poetry will come up later, but I do think that some of us we were born to be poets. I feel it, I live it, I think it, I have it, and It is into my veins,and I loved. I know I was born to be a poet! Mom, many thanks for taking me to school every morning and for teaching me the principles of life, love and respect. My book is dedicated to both of you,the ones I love, Miss: Paz Pelayo and Mr: Pelayo my lovely Parents, I love you! Also I dedicate this book of poems to my husband Mr: Jose Salazar and my children for they are my other treasures, I love you all! I thank God for letting me know how much I love you now when I am alive, when I am here and I have all of you close to me. Asking God to protect and bless you all,Ana Pelayo. more…

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