Analysis of Train of Ghouls




Train of Ghouls

Scratch my culture with your wisdom
and pour some sense into my glass
then send a message from your kingdom
to destroy the weeds from choking grass

With Sampson strength remove this pillar
and tread my grapes then raise a cup
my trust is dead but I'm no killer
just had some problem's growing up

Mephistophelean breezes blow
to scatter what was once so pure
to all parts of this puppet show
on a train of ghouls I take the tour

Lament engulfs the weary spirit
the game is over I concede
you win again your game has merit
another chance is all I need


Scheme X ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11101110 01110111 110101110 101011101 110101110 01111101 111111110 11110101 1101 11011111 11111101 101111101 01101010 01110101 110111110 01011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 549
Words 108
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dave Ratcliffe

Some of my imagery may seem a little on the dark side at times but I feel the pain of the chastened and broken among my close family and friends. I write from the heart to express my innermost thoughts through song lyrics and poetry. I try always, ‘to be true to my philosophy of understanding tolerance, to share my perceptions and desires with integrity’. I have just finished my first play which was both a challenging and rewarding experience, which I intend to follow up on. I enjoy reading poetry from all over the world. Poetry.com is a great platform for me to network with other like-minded people and showcase my own work for others to be moved and inspired. After all this is the duty of a poet…I have just had my first poetry book published with the Title Scratching the Page and my thanks go to Michael Dobson for producing it and to all those who read it more…

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